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My name is Jess. And my story is... Well it's different. I seem to attract trouble or maybe I'm the cause of it.  Anyways I should probably start from the beginning...
When I was little I found out I had this... Talent. If I looked into a persons eyes and told them to do something, they'd actually do it. I know what you're thinking it sounds ridiculous but I'm not kidding. I have this power to make people do what i say.  I found out on the night of my 10th  birthday when my mom and dad got into this big fight. Well this wasn't like most fights. It was just getting worse and worse and suddenly I heard a thump in the living room where they were fighting. I rushed in to see my mom on the floor and my dad looking so angry. I felt myself get cold and hot all at once as my heart hammered in my chest.  I rushed to my mothers side her head was bleeding. It looked like she had hit the table when she fell. "What did you do? What did you do to her?" I screamed at him as I tried to wake her up. He tried lying to me telling me she slipped but I called him a lier. That's when he grabbed me. I felt fear real fear for the first time from My father. 
I locked eyes with him and screamed "Stop! Don't hurt me!" and well he did just that. He seemed to freeze and his eyes kind of went glassy. I pulled out of his grip and called 911. He stood there frozen for a few more moments then he seemed to snap out of it. He looked at me like he was confused and out of it. But just as he was coming back to himself the cops busted in and arrested him and the paramedics came to help my mother. I rode with her to the hospital but... She never woke up... They said she had died on impact there was nothing I could have done to save her... My father ended up going to prison and I... Ended up in foster care a ward of the state. That's when my adventure really began... 
I'm writing another original story... First person to try it out.
Aeivyen Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very interesting; I can't wait to read more.
X12-1992 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Allexaire Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
oooh. not only does she have this power, but she has serious background issues. this is going to be a good story, i can tell.
and first person work well for this. i like writing in first person.

keep it up my luffles! :heart:
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